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Images_12__max50

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Posted 5 months ago

 

broken doesn’t quite explain this being


what a curse this unbearable feeling


then again a curse can b broken, im forever frozen


my soul keeps fading and soon ill be gone


wasn’t your fault,i gave up so you won


in my moment of weakness,you disappeared


im sorry i expected u to care


that hurt so much it became a part of me


my comfort, my constant, my friend, mon amie


i almost enjoy this recurring torture


this infinite pain, i call my twisted rapture


its an effort to breathe, to live


death sounds so beautiful right now


abandoning the flesh,forgotten by the world,my final bow


i’d be doing u a favour one less person to hate


but i don’t deserve such a sweet  end,so ill wait


prolong this horrid lyfe,to be hurt by most if not all


till that day wen the stitches of my heart give way and i fall


 

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omg! i didn't know u did poetry! wow ur good! i really loved that!!


Without pain there can't be love without love there can't be life

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OMFG YOUR AMAZING

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Love the parts      " but I don't deserve such sweet end so I'll wait prolong this horrid life"   also 


                                  "till the stiches of my heart give way and I fall"


  Isn't pain Beautiful?  sure it hurts alot, but look at the paintings it can create.


 

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woah..i didnt know you had it in ya eat! xD


real nice BUT the rhyming is sorta off in some places lol other than that...pretty cool.


These tears shall fall on shattered remains.

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oh good u found it btw shes super sensitive bout it lol


im a million different people from one day to the next

Flower_max50

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what i said its GOOD!! it really is eat...*whispers* dont kill me?


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yeah

Flower_max50

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yeah?


what? why? huhhhhhhh? o.O


schizo i hate you.


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lol yeah so does she right bout now LOL


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Flower_max50

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no no no noooo


eat? im sorry! just constructive criticism i swear!! it really is GOOD


dont be mad!  


urgh schizo


you


are


on


my


list.


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Me__9__max50

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wat?


do i realy look like i care?!

Images_12__max50

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its fine thanx


 

Lain_smilin_max50

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lol sorry wed i just had to do that


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Flower_max50

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eat? *pouts*


you cant be mad at me cz then who will i make fun of z with? tis IMPOSSIBLE...think of how lonely shell be!


schizo SHUT UP...still on my list btw. *death stare*


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Me__9__max50

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wats the list?am i on it?


do i realy look like i care?!

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lol vamp u kill me


come on i was doing her a favour


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Flower_max50

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you did no one a favour z!


everyones pissed off and confused and your PET is not helping matters either.


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Images_12__max50

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its fine really


dont mind the schizo

Flower_max50

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really? *sigh of relief*


note to self: whatever schizo says...its a trap. do not listen i repeat DO NOT LISTEN to her.


but...for NOW..youre off my list. temporary parole xD


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yeah


lol she likes to mess wif ppl its how she gets her high

Flower_max50

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hmmm


i get my high by pushing people off my throne and firing bubblegum factory employees.


i just love the sad look on their faces and their pathetic sob stories on how they cant possibly feed all eleven of their children without a job..


pffffttt....yea RIGHT i wasnt born YESTERDAY


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true I was the one born yesterday


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Images_12__max50

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LOL wed i never wanna work for u


cuz i will steal bubblegum lol


 

Flower_max50

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hmph my employees love me!


they even spray paint my car everyday to show how much they care...


and if you steal, its an automatic HAND REMOVAL..


chop chop  xD haha


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yeh eat listen too her trust me i know last tym i got shot at for borrowing some equipment


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lol i think its just fun to shoot at u

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oh yeaaa i remember that! hows your kidney doing? i heard they had to forclosure your house cz of the medical expenses...tis a shame


*mumbles under breath* thatll teach you to borrow from me you cheating little peice of SHIT...oops *nervous laughter*


BACK TO WORK


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well apparently i need a new kidney *slices you open and grabs your kidney* i hope u dont drink


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*watches as the kidney starts to disintegrate before her very eyes*


um..only on special occasions..


xD


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