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Posted 5 months ago broken doesn’t quite explain this being what a curse this unbearable feeling then again a curse can b broken, im forever frozen my soul keeps fading and soon ill be gone wasn’t your fault,i gave up so you won in my moment of weakness,you disappeared im sorry i expected u to care that hurt so much it became a part of me my comfort, my constant, my friend, mon amie i almost enjoy this recurring torture this infinite pain, i call my twisted rapture its an effort to breathe, to live death sounds so beautiful right now abandoning the flesh,forgotten by the world,my final bow i’d be doing u a favour one less person to hate but i don’t deserve such a sweet end,so ill wait prolong this horrid lyfe,to be hurt by most if not all till that day wen the stitches of my heart give way and i fall
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| Posted 5 months ago omg! i didn't know u did poetry! wow ur good! i really loved that!! Without pain there can't be love without love there can't be life |
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| Posted 5 months ago OMFG YOUR AMAZING |
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| Posted 4 months ago Love the parts " but I don't deserve such sweet end so I'll wait prolong this horrid life" also "till the stiches of my heart give way and I fall" Isn't pain Beautiful? sure it hurts alot, but look at the paintings it can create.
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| Posted about 1 month ago woah..i didnt know you had it in ya eat! xD real nice BUT the rhyming is sorta off in some places lol other than that...pretty cool. These tears shall fall on shattered remains. |
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| Posted about 1 month ago oh good u found it btw shes super sensitive bout it lol im a million different people from one day to the next |
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| Posted about 1 month ago what i said its GOOD!! it really is eat...*whispers* dont kill me? These tears shall fall on shattered remains. |
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| Posted about 1 month ago yeah |
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| Posted about 1 month ago yeah? what? why? huhhhhhhh? o.O schizo i hate you. These tears shall fall on shattered remains. |
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| Posted about 1 month ago lol yeah so does she right bout now LOL im a million different people from one day to the next |
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| Posted about 1 month ago no no no noooo eat? im sorry! just constructive criticism i swear!! it really is GOOD dont be mad! urgh schizo you are on my list. These tears shall fall on shattered remains. |
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| Posted about 1 month ago wat? do i realy look like i care?! |
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| Posted about 1 month ago its fine thanx
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| Posted about 1 month ago lol sorry wed i just had to do that im a million different people from one day to the next |
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| Posted about 1 month ago eat? *pouts* you cant be mad at me cz then who will i make fun of z with? tis IMPOSSIBLE...think of how lonely shell be! schizo SHUT UP...still on my list btw. *death stare* These tears shall fall on shattered remains. |
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| Posted about 1 month ago wats the list?am i on it? do i realy look like i care?! |
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| Posted about 1 month ago lol vamp u kill me come on i was doing her a favour im a million different people from one day to the next |
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| Posted about 1 month ago you did no one a favour z! everyones pissed off and confused and your PET is not helping matters either. These tears shall fall on shattered remains. |
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| Posted about 1 month ago its fine really dont mind the schizo |
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| Posted about 1 month ago really? *sigh of relief* note to self: whatever schizo says...its a trap. do not listen i repeat DO NOT LISTEN to her. but...for NOW..youre off my list. temporary parole xD These tears shall fall on shattered remains. |
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| Posted about 1 month ago yeah lol she likes to mess wif ppl its how she gets her high |
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| Posted about 1 month ago hmmm i get my high by pushing people off my throne and firing bubblegum factory employees. i just love the sad look on their faces and their pathetic sob stories on how they cant possibly feed all eleven of their children without a job.. pffffttt....yea RIGHT i wasnt born YESTERDAY These tears shall fall on shattered remains. |
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| Posted about 1 month ago true I was the one born yesterday im a million different people from one day to the next |
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| Posted about 1 month ago LOL wed i never wanna work for u cuz i will steal bubblegum lol
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| Posted about 1 month ago hmph my employees love me! they even spray paint my car everyday to show how much they care... and if you steal, its an automatic HAND REMOVAL.. chop chop xD haha These tears shall fall on shattered remains. |
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| Posted about 1 month ago yeh eat listen too her trust me i know last tym i got shot at for borrowing some equipment im a million different people from one day to the next |
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| Posted about 1 month ago lol i think its just fun to shoot at u |
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| Posted about 1 month ago oh yeaaa i remember that! hows your kidney doing? i heard they had to forclosure your house cz of the medical expenses...tis a shame *mumbles under breath* thatll teach you to borrow from me you cheating little peice of SHIT...oops *nervous laughter* BACK TO WORK These tears shall fall on shattered remains. |
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| Posted about 1 month ago well apparently i need a new kidney *slices you open and grabs your kidney* i hope u dont drink im a million different people from one day to the next |
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| Posted about 1 month ago *watches as the kidney starts to disintegrate before her very eyes* um..only on special occasions.. xD These tears shall fall on shattered remains. |

